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Post by Jeremiah Sloan on May 6, 2011 13:08:04 GMT -5
Anybody have any feedback for the new guy?
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Post by Ezekiel Tyson on May 6, 2011 13:11:52 GMT -5
nice rp dude you are one of the best rpers I've seen, now how about some feedback for mine
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Post by Vinny Falcone on May 6, 2011 15:50:42 GMT -5
Loving the work form our new talent!! WOOT WOOT!!
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Post by Jeremiah Sloan on May 7, 2011 9:45:27 GMT -5
Ezekiel, the roleplay was decent. I would add a little more description so the reader can capture the true feelings of Ezekiel. Let the reader be able to see inside the man (if that makes sense). The only other thing is it seems as though your dialogue was a little redundant. I would recommend trying to look up synonyms for some of the words you use.
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Post by AJ Johnson on May 7, 2011 12:34:33 GMT -5
Any on my work?
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Post by Vinny Falcone on May 9, 2011 14:15:32 GMT -5
U SUCK AJ!!
Haha, enjoying your work as always!
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Post by "Hotstuff" Chris Future on May 9, 2011 17:51:51 GMT -5
I think this GWA is loaded. I come from the old 2001-2005 days and we have amazing talent.
But I'm starting to really think we're deeper now then we were than!
By the way, thoughts on my RP's?
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Post by The Brian Magnum on May 10, 2011 13:17:38 GMT -5
Chris I love your work! I have never been able to work with you before in the past, so im looking forward to it in the Future haha get it! Chris Future!
Any thoughts on mine guys?
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Post by "The Scorpion" Kevin Lloyd on May 10, 2011 16:40:33 GMT -5
Hey, what did you guys think of my first one?
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Post by JD Screw on May 15, 2011 17:43:51 GMT -5
Well done, AJ. Had a good time rpin' with you this week. You're lucky that you last one came in at 4am for me because I would have replied to that one as well. Had a good time, you defiantly brought out my A game. Thanks for that.
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Post by AJ Johnson on May 15, 2011 17:52:49 GMT -5
HaHa..Thanks bro,you brought out my A game this week as well....Pretty sure after reading both of our work this match is gunna be a war....I had fun and look forward to doin it again Bro.
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Post by "The Scorpion" Kevin Lloyd on May 23, 2011 15:12:41 GMT -5
Just wondering what you guys thought of my last one.
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Post by AJ Johnson on May 23, 2011 17:13:18 GMT -5
really Good shit bro..
any on mine?
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Post by "The Scorpion" Kevin Lloyd on May 23, 2011 19:52:37 GMT -5
In all honesty, you're one of the best writers I've seen in a long time. The one thing you might want to work on is grammar and punctuation. Now, don't get me wrong, I'm definitely not perfect in those two areas, but I definitely try to be when I write.
You have a much better talent for developing a character than me, or a lot of other roleplayers I've seen. JD's gonna be hard pressed to top that one.
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Post by AJ Johnson on May 25, 2011 21:46:08 GMT -5
Anybody have some feedback on my last two?
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Post by Rob Winter on May 25, 2011 21:59:39 GMT -5
Good shit, AJ. One can really tell you and JD bring out the best in each other. I'm really enjoying the back and forth between you two the past couple weeks.
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Post by AJ Johnson on May 25, 2011 22:08:46 GMT -5
HaHa I'm enjoying it too.Thanks bro,hey shoot me a pm with anything special you might want in your match.
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Post by "The Scorpion" Kevin Lloyd on Jun 4, 2011 20:30:51 GMT -5
Any feedback? Things I need to work on?
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Post by Rob Winter on Jun 13, 2011 10:08:48 GMT -5
Everyone here does a great job every week. However, I'd like to especially recognize Chase Adams, Sean Hustle, and the Outlaw. These are all brand new to the roster and are already really stepping up!
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